So I've been finishing off my spreads for The Adventures book for my degree show. Boy, it takes while for me to feel happy with them... But i've been working on one tonight and the art is pretty finished, but I have a dilemma...
Should the text on the right side be over or under the puffin?
Answers on a postcard please...
YOU ANSWERED - I LISTENED! Over wins the day!
(Also some tweaks have occurred!)
7 comments:
personally i think over because it looks more balanced!
I think over - It still reads on from the 1st bit well and is not squashed into the corner...
Over for me too :)
Maybe the 'A Puffin in a cap...' needs to go left a little more, just not sitting right for me? Hope you don't mind me saying?
Fantastic work :)
Not at all Jax - all input appreciated, thanks!
I agree with the other two, defiantly text over the puffin!
It just flows so much nicer when reading, and has a better shape to it aesthetically.
Over....Charlotte ........OVER!!!!!
that is better ...... feathers look good too!!!Like the composition in this piece!!!
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